@清华博士豆沙馅 #113470

這是在蝴蝶的腳上綑一坨肥肉o_O

@愛牛奶盒的人 #113451 白薯獎如何？爐邊放幾個外焦內軟的甜蜜煨白薯給作好詩的人的意像挺可愛的

@中野梓 #113229 不要緊，詩如驟雨，忽來忽去，不可捉摸。

@中野梓 #113218 看來似短篇故事呢……如果讀的字數每行再相近一點好像會好一點??(強迫症發作

"Protruding viciously towards me"聽來好唔詩哦~~

@中野梓 #113099 好棒的意象，只是如果可以更簡煉就好了～～

@愛牛奶盒的人 #113089 我沒有拍拖啊😂😂😂算是不小心描述了某種手足之情吧？

@愛牛奶盒的人 #113080 這是情歌吧😅

大概是2018年終-2019年頭放學的時候創作的歌。那天天色暗沉而悲涼，在大街上走著走著不知怎麼的哼起一段似曾相識的曲調，於是譜起曲來。後來整理手機備忘錄時就取了個名字叫《流離歌》。

1. Hear the song of a captive

captured by his own homeland

For temporary soothing their fiend

he was once a man of war

breaking through the solid wall

however no honors given from the crowd

*Restrain

1. Let us walking hand in hand

through the valley of the death

through the rig-ged moun-ta^ins high

through wilderness of love

through the land watered by tears

till the light shining through darkness

*Restrain

1. Pur-suing it like a hound

Marching to it like a steed

Albatross in searching for the south

Just like deer in a drought

Want of water want of feed

Walking with weary legs to the spring

*Restrain

1. Just like foal of swiftest steed

bounded next to turning mill

Year after year walk around a stone

Living behind barbed wires

Digging grave for his fellows

Until finally leaned down his own's *Restrain

--------------*Restrain-------------

With the eyes of eagle's eyes

looking upon bluest sky

what if he has a pair of wings

with song of robin in spring

Just like homing tern of North

Lovingly reach his nest just as those days

-----------*Restrain end------------

1. When the daylight comes to end

his name was in roll calling

he marched to it just like calming steed

Just like meteor in the night

Just like homing tern of North

Lovingly reach his nest just as those days

流亡。 可以是外在的，也可以是內心的。

@愛狗卻養貓 #110868 謝謝你哦～ToT

第一張很母湯ε=ε=ε=┏(゜ロ゜;)┛

好玩( ´▽` )ﾉ

@愛牛奶盒的人 #102005 發現了! 中文很厲害哦!